Yesterday I set the children a challenge. They were to write anything that they liked as long as it made sense as a whole piece of writing and included as many WOW words from our board as possible. Here are the place getters with the most WOW words!
Once upon a time there was an epic and scary haunted house. In that haunted house there was a zombie in a bed hiding under the repulsive covers. Then a person came in the revolting haunted house and went in the bed. Then the zombie jumped on the woozy person in a jiffy, but the person had a sword. The person killed the peculiar and fierce zombie. The person heard a noise and lots of ghosts killed the person.
By Cohen
Once upon a time there was a ferocious, fierce and woozy lion. He lived in a cave all by himself with epic, humongous and repulsive spiders (white tails)! But one day the epic, humongous, repulsive spiders climbed onto the epic, woozy, ferocious, fierce lion in a jiffy. They left like a jet in a jiffy. They found some scrumptious meat.
By Hayley
The extraordinary environment is getting covered in revolting rubbish and fierce plastic! Do you know why i am talking about this? It's because animals die and get trapped by the revolting and ferocious rubbish! In a jiffy the world will be covered in everlasting rubbish! You don't want the epic, splendiferous, luscious, appetising world to get covered in intently, severe rude rubbish. Ecstatically we'll save the world.
Giddy up horsey lets go and find some revolting rubbish at this school. I'm an enviro rep who picks up the revolting everlasting rubbish in a jiffy. I must invent a rubbish picker upper! The world will look hideous if it is covered in revolting rubbish.
By Connor
Term 2:
Today we were using Discovery Time to drive our writing. The goal was to use some words from our vocabulary wall of amazing words and try and use some different sentence types we know. Here are some examples the caught my eye!
At Discovery Time I played dress-ups with Emma-Jane, Jackson, Tyler and Devan-Rae. Devan-Rae as very ferocious and fierce.
By Sean
In Discovery Time I got to work out how to rub balloons. You might feel a bit of electricity blowing them apart when you are joining them together.
Luke
I made a plane at Discovery Time. It was decorative. It flew quickly. I learnt to never give up. It was a divine Discovery day. In a jiffy I ran to Room 13.
Matilda
I tried to tie a flimsy balloon. Balloon - flimsy, poppable - makes a screeching sound. When i first tried I failed.
Rory
In Discovery Time I learnt how to sew. Discovery Time - epic, awesome, extraordinary - we all have fun. After i sewed I checked what was in the other classes.
Connor
Ruby wrote a description of a setting. The idea was that the children had to describe the setting without saying the name - show dont tell....
My setting is near my house. It has a beautiful awa (river) water with ducks. It has green trees and a pale bridge and when you go across the bridge you will see a playground. My dad plays cricket there. Its a wonderful place to be. You can climb trees. I definitely love feeding the ducks. It makes me laugh.
By Ruby
This is a story written by Matilda at home....
Once upon a time lived two children James and Matilda. They lived in the forest. It was spooky. They liked spookiness like bats. They slept in leaves. One day they ran and ran. "Are you scared?" said James. "No" said Matilda. "I am scared" said James. There are ponies. "There's mum and dad but they're in jail". "Let's save the day! Yes!" said Matilda. "I will be super man!" said James. "I will be super girl!" said Matilda. Off they go. Just then a fairy came past. Maybe she can help find them. They realised she had a problem too. It was the same problem. Lets work together. They took the rocket bush. They flew down. They got their guns and began. They shot the man. They did it!!! They saved the day!
By Matilda
Week 7 Term 1:
This week we have been looking at a shark jaw! Here is some of our writing!
The Shark jaw is rough. Shark jaw - boney, fishy, smelly - the shark jaw came biting. Slowly the shark came close. It smells weird. The shark jaw looks boney.
Tyler R.
Shark jaw - fishy, rotten, old - the shark jaw is smelly. The shark jaw is really sharp. It can be a danger to animals. The shark jaw is terrifying. The shark jaw is hard.
Casey
The shark jaw is rotten and the side of the shark jaw is smooth. The shark jaw is ferocious. Sadly, the shark jaw came closer. The shark jaw is sharp. Shark - scary, mad, fishy - he is angry.
Leannah
The shark jaw smells squidy. Madly, the shark jaw looks terrifying. The shark jaw - fierce, mad, frightening. It feels rough.
Cohen
The shark jaw looks terrifying. Quietly, the shark jaw stays quiet. Shark jaw - boney, sharp, hard - could cause a lot of damage.
Sylvie
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